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Thursday 25 May 2017

The Enchanted Portal.

       
                                          The Enchanted Portal.

Once upon a time there was a girl called Shimmer with her family and they were in the backyard 
playing soccer with their soccer ball, when Shimmer said “I’m getting hungry, I want to go get a snack” So her mum said “all right you can go back inside to get a snack, but it’s a beautiful day out here and it’s really hot in there so make sure you come back out”.So Shimmer went to her room and got some cooler clothes on and got a snack, but when she went to open her door there wasn’t a door, there was a portal, she was really confused, so when she stepped in the portal there was a big flash, she felt weird, when the big white flash faded, she was in another world, a Magical world with wolves, butterflies, beautiful plants and flowers, but then she realized she was smaller and the ground was closer to her.Her mum was wondering where she had gone.Then she turned around and the portal was still there so she went back through it to have a look in the mirror in her bedroom.When she looked in the mirror she was shocked to she that she was a wolf, so she went back through the portal to the magical world, but when she turned around the portal wasn’t there, she was trapped! Then she heard a voice"ha, I have trapped you!!!" She looked around scared looking for the thing that was talking, then she saw a woman, she instantly started running so fast, faster than she nomally runs, so she ran until her paws hurt, when she looked behind her the woman wasn't there and there was a portal so she went through the portal and she was back in her bedroom but she was still a wolf, so she went to show her mum, her mum went crazy. She asked why she was a wolf" WHY ARE YOU A WOLF!!!"said mum, Shimmer said "because I went through a magic portal that turned me into a wolf, I can show you the portal" . so she showed her parnets and they jumped through the portal and turned into a wolf.  They loved that world, they said " from now on we will live here in this world " and they never returned home again                                                                     
                                 The End.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Mikayla, wow, this is quite a scary story. I'm not sure I would want to live as a wolf forever....I like that you have used speech marks in your work. Well done. Next time you might like to make your font a little bit bigger as this was quite hard to read.

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