I was a student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. This was a place where I shared my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts.
Today my class have been doing Acrostic poems. I did one for my friend Riley, she was nervous about this going on my blog, but too bad for her. (I am not trying to be mean.) But here is my Acrostic poem!
kiorana Mikayla i am linny did you enjoy doing ACROSTIC POEMS and you did it to riley your cool mikayla i must say your pretty clever did you thin it was to do how did you do it i did it to tim and trust me it was hard and i like the facts you have used it really good EXCELLENT WORK your a hard worker i should say i love as my best friend .
Hey Mikayla, Kirsty here. I like the way you writ a sentence with the word, Next time maybe next time you could try one for Ngakaunui. Did you think about making the writing colorful. Anyway I really do like this, It's cool. I have to go comment on more blogs but keep up the good work, Bye
Kia ora i'm Azire from Gilberthorpe school and. I loved this because you are thinking about other's and it's so cute that you are doing a blog post for Riley. You brought me back to when i did a Blog for my friend. Make sure you you clorin on of you box. bye
you are good at it jood good at do it the facts you have used it cool like it next time yo could you do make it cool but cool work and l what could l what you like cool work of your it cool to see you work to be it cool but l in to going and be happy your work is a Amazing and you can make syre you wor really good to get a cool post
kiorana Mikayla i am linny did you enjoy doing ACROSTIC POEMS and you did it to riley your cool mikayla i must say your pretty clever did you thin it was to do how did you do it i did it to tim and trust me it was hard and i like the facts you have used it really good EXCELLENT WORK your a hard worker i should say i love as my best friend .
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ReplyDeleteKirsty here. I like the way you writ a sentence with the word, Next time maybe next time you could try one for Ngakaunui. Did you think about making the writing colorful. Anyway I really do like this, It's cool. I have to go comment on more blogs but keep up the good work, Bye
Kia ora i'm Azire from Gilberthorpe school and. I loved this because you are thinking about other's and it's so cute that you are doing a blog post for Riley. You brought me back to when i did a Blog for my friend. Make sure you you clorin on of you box. bye
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ReplyDeleteyou are good at it jood good at do it the facts you have used it cool like it next time yo could you do make it cool but cool work and l what could l what you like cool work of your it cool to see you work to be it cool but l in to going and be happy your work is a Amazing and you can make syre you wor really good to get a cool post